Me in the Eyes of Other People

Determined to be someone,I began to shape myself when I first came into contact with this society.Nature has endowed me with merits as well as drawbacks.My personality can ascribe to my life backgrounds and experience.Now and then,there will be someone who commends me or scorns me ,it was them who let me see myself more clearly.
Never losing my temper is one of my biggest virtures,due to that,I had hardly had quarrel with others,which renders me few soulmates."Had you ever wrangle with others"? that seemd to be a question my acquaintances will always ask me.Always laughing a hearty laugh in front of others becomes my characteristic,but I really enjoy of being that ,which can bring cheerfulness both to me and others.
"Diligent" is also a word which my classmates will use to describe me .I set a model for them as being assiduous,so whenever they are lacking of motivation ,I, as an example, become their saurce of driving force.
God is fair,so I am destined to have drawbacks. Being forgerful,I cannot escaped being criticized by my friends or relatives ,however,this defect has rooted in me, so ,I often spend a lot of time finding things which I have left behind in some place.Besides that ,unwilling to do housework is what my parents hate,but I just dislike doing cleaning work.
I was such in the eyes of other people.I know I have shotcomings but I will never be ashamed of myself because I believe I was unique，what I need to do is to better myself.

文章行文连贯，连接词和过渡词合理，使得全文结构紧凑；能熟练使用长难句，文中的长短句搭配合理，此外文中句式变化多样，用词丰富，希望继续努力。不足之处在于对于优缺点的描述略显简单，结尾也比较仓促，明显不如文章开头。Always laughing a hearty laugh in front of others becomes my characteristic, but I really enjoy of being that (这个句子多少有点问题，characteristic是不是可以用signature? enjoy of being that不太明白什么意思)，source of driving force (这里有点直译了吧)，unwilling to do housework (being unwilling或者unwillingness?)。