me in other people's eyes

I'm always see myself as energetic, outgoing and a tall girl. It is because I always take an active part in sports meeting and fond of *** friends. However in my classmate's eyes I am more of a girl who is sociable generous and careless in demeanor.
As a university student, I have taken education for 15 years, which is calculated from primary school. In every stage of the education, I have many classmates. As a whole class, we always go to dinner hall together, and after school we also play together. It is this experience makes me a student who others labeled me as generous. I cannot argue on everything for that makes no sense for classmates.
I am now the monitor of the class, and in the prior school I am also good at solving problems in the class. What's more, I am a student who like to have trip with others. I am always be seen in the flock of people who are ready to set off to parks, zoos or library. That makes me a student who have many playmates.
The last two paragraphs concerning my advantages, support this idea "it is the experience I have gone through has made me what I am today". I remember that I was asked by a classmate to lend her a book "If Life Is Always Like the First Sight" of mine, however, I again and again forgot that. I really felt sorry that time and ever thought about it. I always have too many things to do, so I always forget something. Thanks to so many friends who do not care for that.
This is all about what others see me in their eyes. They really see me in another way, but I agree with this.

文章内容基本连贯，能熟练使用长难句，文中的长短句搭配合理，希望继续努力。文章用词不错，但是学术词汇不够丰富，建议平时多积累，另外连接词和过渡词也稍欠丰富，导致文章显得不够流畅和缺少层次感，希望以后可以多加注意。语法上冠词的使用有些问题，如every stage of the education，good at solving problems in the class。