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帖子  郑东森 周五 三月 07, 2014 5:15 pm

The shawshank redemption
Red narrating: I have no idea to this day what those two Italian ladies were s inging about. Truth is, I don’t want to know. Some things are better left unsaid.I’d like to think they were singing about somethings so beautiful,it can" t expressed in words,and it makes your heart ache because of it.I tell you, those voices soared higher and farther than anybody in a great place dares to dr eam. It was as if some beautiful bird had flapped into our drab little cage an d made these walls dissolve away, and for the briefest of moments, every last man is Shawshank felt free.
comment:i feel this sentence is very well, especially some phrase, it is not only make it read wonderful, but also tell us the importance of opera.
Red reading a note left by Andy: Remember, Red, hope is good thing, mabye the best of things. And no good thing ever dies.
comment:this sentence is perfect, maybe it is very short, but it tells us the most important thing, a person should not give up his hope.

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帖子  Admin 周一 三月 10, 2014 3:47 am

Some things are better left unsaid.是个很好的表达,It was as if some beautiful bird ... 开始和前面的句子有所不同,前面这种truth is 和I tell you是比较典型的口语,后面应该是为了追求戏剧效果而表现的。

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