Me in the eyes of other people 1048605史润泽

Me in the eyes of other people
I don't know what other people define me as,but it must be of great fun to observe and deduce.
Born in the time that one-child policy was prevailing,I was absolutely the only child in my family.I was sent to school at sixth year of my life.Most of my teachers hold the point of view that I was a little princess who had been mollycoddled and over protected.As a matter of fact,it was not true at all.I was just suffering my timidity when faced with adults and strangers.The reticent was misunderstood by them.As a result of it,they didn't know what kind of person I really was.
But in my parents' eyes,it was no doubt that i was totally a good girl.They acceded that I never did something wrong nor did I tell lies.What's more,I've acquired how to get a decent mark in all kinds of exams.Always being told they were proud of me,I sometimes felt anxious about their praise.I was not as good as they thought to be.
Only my most intimate friends knew the genuine me.They described me as a girl with a kidlike appearance but a sassy mind.The saying was not something commend but I enjoy this valuation.As for me,studying was the long-lasting course I dedicated myself to but amusement was of the same importance for me.Doing something crazy is not unforgiving when one was in his or her adolesences.On the contrary,it's supposed to be inevitable when everybody was young.
I have so many figures in different people's eyes.They are not similar but they are all real.

句法知识很棒，词汇量积累不错，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇，请继续努力，但文章在结构上欠考虑，衔接成分不够，文章缺少一个比较明确的主题，导致各段之间略显孤立。具体的一些小错误如，Born in the time that one-child policy was prevailing, I was absolutely the only child in my family.总感觉这句话有点重复呢。suffering my timidity ... (suffer后应加上from)。it was no doubt that i was totally a good girl (there is no doubt)。Doing something crazy is not unforgiving when one was in his or her adolesences. On the contrary, it's supposed to be inevitable when everybody was young. 这两句想要表达意思不是很明确。I have so many figures in different people's eyes. They are not similar but they are all real. 个人觉得你可能想说的是，你在人们眼中的不同形象是由你和他们的亲密程度决定的。