Me in the Eyes of Other People 1048218周名扬

me in the Eyes of other people

I'm always worried about how others think about me because I want to be a perfect person all the time,And there are many different opinions about me that sometimes I think I have a multiple personality.
Firstly,my three roommates all think that I am hard--wording.Because when they are playing computer games,I'm always studying.And many of my friends all thought that I want to take part in the entrance exams for postgraduate schools.But they don't know I don't want to study and I'm often complain it.Even tough I'm studying hard but it is not efficient.And my marks didn't look nice.
Secondly,many friends think I'm temperate and clam that people easy to get along with me. Whatever happened to me that I was dispassionate.Even though there is a bolt from the blue,I'm not frightened.And I can listen attentively to others that I have many friends.
Finally,there are also some people said I was introvert in that I didn't speak much.But they don't know I'm not speaking because I'm thinking.And I don't want to speak meaningless words.Sometimes I may lose confidence and afraid I will do wrong.
There are many view about me,and they are real me.It's like "a thousand reader have a thousand Hamlet".Although others' opinions are important,but I want to be myself.I'm unique in the world.

文章的内容略显直白和平淡，句法还可以，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短，行文稍欠考虑，有些句间关系没有处理好，还应适当增加过程性词汇的使用，请继续努力。一些具体的表达错误如下，I'm often complain it.(基本语法错误)，Even tough I'm studying hard but it is not efficient. And my marks didn't look nice. (比较中式的表达，可以试试我们课上讲过的disproportionate这个词)，Whatever happened to me that I was dispassionate. (句子表达有问题)，And I can listen attentively to others that I have many friends. (这样的句子在文中有很多，that这种用法并不正确，另外表示因果关系不单单只有so...that...，because，可以适当换几种表达方式)，Sometimes I may lose confidence and afraid I will do wrong. (口语+中式)，There are many view about me, and they are real me. (The way people look at me may vary, however, the image they portray is a reflection of myself for certain.)