Me in the eyes of other people

Everyone has different characters in the eyes of other people. When I ask my friends “what kind of person do you think I am”, the most word they use to describe me is “quiet”.
From my friends’ perspective, in my childhood, I am really a shy girl who is not good at expressing myself in the public. I remember that on the first day when I went to school, my teacher asked everyone to introduce themselves, and I was too shy to speak fluently in front of the whole class. Sometime I feel embarrassed when I talk with strangers. As time goes by, I gradually overcome the shyness and become more confident. Now they describe me as a good listener who can listen to others complaint quietly and give them some suggestions. They think I am gentle and easy-going .They are willing turn to me for help and share their happiness and sorrow together.
In my parents’ eyes, I am a clever and cute daughter. I have different sides in different situations. At home, I am outgoing and talkative, sometimes my parents think I am a little noisy at home, but without me they feel that it’s too quiet. All the times, I am proud of being their good daughter. I rarely make them worry about my study and other aspects of my life. As I grow older, I will be more understanding and make my effort to live up to their expectations.
In my teachers’ eyes, I am a quiet and earnest student. As a class leader, I am responsible and conscientious. However, I think I still have some shortcomings to overcome, I am lacking in leadership and courageousness. Sometimes I am more willing to be an assistant rather than a leader.
In a word, there are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people’s eyes. There are different me from different people’s perspective. In front of my friends, I am mild and easy-going. To my parents, I am changeable. Other people are like mirrors which can reflect my advantages and disadvantages. I will improve myself in the process of looking at these helpful mirrors.

文中连接词和过渡词稍欠丰富，内容基本连贯，但行文稍欠流畅；能使用一些结构简单的长句，文章用词不错，但是学术词汇不够丰富，建议平时多积累，希望继续努力。需要注意的是文中时态的变化，以及一些表达方式，如in the public (应当为in public)，I have different sides in different situations. (这句话太中式了)，最后就是有些句子之间关系不是很紧密，没起到很好的效果，今后可以在文章和段落的整体性上多思考下。