Me in the eyes of other people

Generally. I get to know myself from both the acquaintances around me and my family .From these Intimate relationships , I can get better self-acknowledgments . Started with my friends , the nodding acquaintances treat me as a gentle and quiet girl while my close friends have definitely the opposites impressions . Take my roommates for instances , I am a rather independent girl in the eyes of them because I made my first trip to Nanjing without my parents when I was admitted by CPU . Besides , not only independence in actions , I am inclined to be my own master , managing my own affairs based on my mind . However , my roommates sometimes make jokes on my bad sense of direction because I always getting lost and I do not have awareness to remember the road when I go out with them . Because of the above reason , one of my roommates , Shi run ze have made me a nickname from animation , Nature Idiot , declaring it is a compliment . But I firmly suggested it a irony. And in the eyes of my family , I am a decent student because I have fulfilled their expectations by entering a fair decent college . But also I am a disobedient daughter for I often fight against my parents when they try to force me to engage in something that I felt really reluctant to commit. So my father will sometimes condemn me strictly and make a conclusion that if I fail to follow his advices, I will fail in my future. But after the heat of conflicts cooling, my father always seems to forget the confrontation we have just had, including the conclusion, and shows his full care to me.
The images of myself in other people'eyes like a mirror that reflect both the positive and negatives sides of my characteristics. I can benefit a lot from taking in the words from other people objectively.

文章行文连贯，连接词和过渡词合理，使得全文结构紧凑；能熟练使用长难句，文中的长短句搭配合理，句式变化多样，希望继续努力。文章用词不错，学术词汇较为丰富。 I get to know myself from both the acquaintances around me and my family. (aquaintance and family就可以了，不用其它多余的词)，比较两种朋友的看法时，gentle and quiet girl 和后面提到的independence等并不算opposite吧，此外主谓不一致和时态的错误在文中也存在一些，请多加注意！