Me in the Eyes of Other People

It' s not an easy question to answer and I believe that no one has ever actually asked his or her friend this kind of question. Besides, how many of us can fully discover ourselves at this young age without much life experience? Anyway, I'll give it a try.
I think the first word comes to my friends' mind when I'm mentioned is "tall". Honestly, I myself even cannot figure out why I'm 170cm while my father is only 173cm and my mother is 163cm. My height is really not something I'm happy about, because to a girl living in the south it sort of means I'd better not wear high heels if I want to find a boyfriend. Also being high sometimes can be a little bit awkward, especially when people is not good at sports, and it even makes them look more clumsy.
Another word that I often heared is "optimistic" or from more frankly ones is "lazy". I hate study, I admit. I never do my assignments until it's the last day before deadline. Friends sometimes even asked me,"Don't you worry about the coming exam?" Hell yeah! I worry so much but still I won't review my book until the last day! I always have movies to watch or other excuses to free myself from study! The thing is that now I'm a English major and as a matter of fact, I like English. I wish to have plenty of time to reading English novels and speaking to native speakers. It's just the way how the school teaches us is annoying. Learning is like a task.
The third and last word I come up with is "humorous". At least, I hope that I am a humorous person. I wish to bring joy and laughter to people. You know, life is short. What is the meaning of all this struggling for future if you don't know how to enjoy yourself now?
Everbody is diferrent. We have our own features and that's exactly what makes the world fantastic.

作者句法知识不错，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩，free myself from study是我最喜欢的一句话；文章结构不是很严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用，学术词汇的使用也显得比较贫乏。文章整体上偏口语化，短句比较多，显得思路不够连贯，今后请多加注意。文章中的一些错误如下，being high sometimes 你这就不是一般的高了 tall呢也就算了，high一般是形容物的，而且起码得几十米才算high吧，另外high还有其它意思（你懂的……），用在这就不是很合适吧。第二段可以这样来写试试Being tall would definitely be the first pression I give to most people, a 170cm girl standing out of the crowd. I have always been considering my height a gene mutation since my father is 173cm and my mother is 163cm. 这句就太口语了The thing is that now ... I wish to have plenty of time to reading English novels and speaking to native speakers. It's just the way how the school teaches us is annoying. Learning is like a task. 如果有因果关系，是不是可以把这几句话连接在一起？最后关于humorous并没有充分的解释和说明。