1048419刘振第一次作业

[size=12]When I see the title,"Me in the eye of other people",I am confused.I have been always thinking about this question that what I am in others eyes.Everything is constantly changing,So we are.What different between past and now,is that my image in the eye of other people.
I requested a my friend who knows me best in middle school,because he is my desk-mate and roommate.He gave me a lot of words both good and bad--active,humorous,industrious,confident,forceful and careful,bad-tempered as well as bigmouth sometimes.He said that I were the first person to came into the classroom and devoted almost all the time into studying even when my right arm fractured.I was very active after class.I often play jokes with others. He told me I was his good example.But I often mess on the table.To his confused,there always were some girls welling to help me clean up.
I think I am change when I entered into college in that I am growing.So I asked my college friends.They gave me so many different answers.One girl perceived me as too introverted and shy in front of girls to speak on my own initiative.In the impression of the other friends, I am very enthusiastic, helpful.No matter what things need help,I always led the way.
Last,I want to know what kind of person am I in my parents eye.I talked with my parents.They said When I was a child I was very naughty,and I often grab foods with my little brother.What is more,I always asked to my mother for pocket money. But now I am growing up,and I learn to share foods with my family.
To my surprise,there are various descriptions.As a saying goes,"there are a thousand Hamlet in a thousand people's eye"People have different impressions on us.That is to say,we have so type of images to the different person.[/size]

文中连接词和过渡词稍欠丰富，内容基本连贯，能使用一些结构简单的长句，但是不能够熟练运用，文章用词不错，但是学术词汇不够丰富，建议平时多积累。开头有点绕，可以更简洁点直奔主题，读者不关心你是不是confused还是puzzled啊，关心的是你的回答。文中时态不一致的地方比较多，今后写作时需要多加注意。一些表达方式上也有问题，如I requested a my friend (inquire of)，I was very active after class. I often play jokes with others.(这两句话之间以及上下文之间没什么关联)，To his confused, there always were some girls welling to help me clean up. (这里的表达有问题，我觉得可能是What surprised him is not only the disorderliness on my desk, but the kindess of some girls who are willing to clean it up.) 总体来看，文章还是略偏口语化，今后应在写作中采用适当的书面用语和表达方式。