Me in the Eyes of Other People

We expose ourselves to innumerable eyes everyday. We behave well to create a better impression. No matter how cunningly we craft our image program ,we will unavoidably reveal our personality defects .My image in the eyes of my partner is not an exception. Fortunately, it is rather positive and gratifying. There are five words to describe me: spectacled, easygoing, energetic, industrious and stubborn.
It seems that what painted on my portrait is a pair of glasses. Is it a symbol of a bluestocking or a sign of a bookworm ? Don’t over think about it , because my partner who has twenty-twenty vision just caught a brief glimpse and notice this inharmonious object. I should have protect my eyes so that the only words to describe my appearance may less monotonous.
The second word is easygoing .In her mind I have never lose my temper .She can hardly see I shouting hysteric or arguing with someone out of control. Smile is always wearing on my face, which show my eagerness and enthusiasm to make friends with other people .I think this word can best describe me.
The third and fourth word relates directly to my good habit which is a rarity among us. Because of this habit I also have a nickname : grandma. These two words seem paradox .However ,the fact is my settled time to get up is six o’clock whether it is Monday or Sunday and I never dozed off in class even when I was in senior high school. There is a saying goes that early bird catches worm, my habit create my energetic and industrious image. Thus it is beneficial to cultivate a good habit
The fifth word shows my shortcoming. I admit that sometimes I am as stubborn as a mule ,It is said that the lefty all have the rebel spirit ,because they are oppressed in the right-oriented world. Sometimes I think no one can understand me and I need to free from other people’s opinion. But actuallyI am a good listener most of times .
Recently ,the most popular words to describe a girl is “white ,rich and beautiful”. These are not my three words .I have my unique personality .I can see a little different me from other people’s eyes which can know myself thoroughly and improve myself .

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