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Elitism and Education Inequality
With more and more parents tend their children to be leaders, elite education is becoming one of the hottest topic in today's life. Elite education originates from the United States, it is those rich elite universities such as Harvard, Oxford University have pursued a hundred years' education mode. Their goals are to cultivate the ruler, science and technology elite and commercial giant. Elite education is particular  emphasis on pedagogue's intelligence and foundation, elite education does not mean simply to get a higher score, but to check their comprehensive quality to measure them.
Of course, elite education has the advantages. First, at least in some ways you can learn to think. In those elite institutions, they will train you how to think, but this  thinking is not like the way how the ordinary people thinking, but to teach you how to think like a leader. Second, you can build some interpersonal relationships for your future's careers. People who have classes with you are also elites, and they can also be the leaders in other companies. Third,  it can also support you an envied rich life or other repay. From some universities open golf as a student elective course, to that parents send their children to various etiquette training class competitively, these actions are all reflect out their willing for the elite life.
However, elite education will inevitably result in education inequality. Firstly, enter a school inequality. Children in the rural area go to school are much harder than children in urban, especially go to the best school. Many schools when they enroll new students, they prefer to choose the city students. As a result, it has already inequality before they begin to study. Secondly, study in inequality. Nowadays, when we in school, all of us want a higher score,so beside normal classes, we all choose to have other extra classes,such as go to teachers' home ,but we should pay for these extra classes, and normally, the better the teachers are, the higher we should pay for. So if a student whose family is poor, he can't afford cost, so that he cannot have extra classes, and if he is poor, he will can't go to the elite school. In a way, he would fall behind to the others. Thirdly, get job inequality. When these so called elite students graduate, they go to society, with this aura, boss would think their abilities are better than others.  As a result, they have more opportunities ,maybe they will get other people's chance although they are not good enough.
Education inequality problem cannot be ignored, so we are all hoping that one day education will have no difference between urban and rural areas; that one day education will have no difference between the poor and the rich families; and one day education will have no difference between elite and ordinary people.

Elitism and Education Inequality
With more and more parents tend their children to be leaders(1), elite education is becoming one of the hottest topic in today's life. Elite education originates from the United States, it is those rich elite universities(2) such as Harvard, Oxford University have pursued a hundred years' education mode(3). Their goals are to cultivate the ruler, science and technology elite and commercial giant. Elite education is particular  emphasis on pedagogue's intelligence and foundation, elite education does not mean simply to get a higher score, but to check their comprehensive quality to measure them.Of course, elite education has the advantages. First, at least in some ways you can learn to think(4). In those elite institutions, they will train you how to think, but this  thinking is not like the way how the ordinary people thinking, but to teach you how to think like a leader(5).Second, you can build some interpersonal relationships for your future's careers. People who have classes with you are also elites, and they can also be the leaders in other companies. Third,  it can also support you an envied rich life or other repay. From some universities open golf as a student elective course, to that parents send their children to various etiquette training class competitively, these actions are all reflect out their willing for the elite life.However, elite education will inevitably result in education inequality. Firstly, enter a school inequality(6). Children in the rural area go to school are much harder than children in urban(7), especially go to the best school. Many schools when they enroll new students, they prefer to choose the city students. As a result, it has already inequality( before they begin to study. Secondly, study in inequality. Nowadays, when we in school, all of us want a higher score(9),so beside normal classes(10), we all choose to have other extra classes,such as go to teachers' home ,but we should pay for these extra classes, and normally, the better the teachers are, the higher we should pay for. So if a student whose family is poor, he can't afford cost, so that he cannot have extra classes, and if he is poor, he will can't go to the elite school. In a way, he would fall behind to the others. Thirdly, get job inequality. When these so called elite students graduate, they go to society, with this aura, boss would think their abilities are better than others.  As a result, they have more opportunities ,maybe they will get other people's chance although they are not good enough.Education inequality problem(11) cannot be ignored, so we are all hoping that one day education will have no difference between urban and rural areas; that one day education will have no difference between the poor and the rich families; and one day education will have no difference between elite and ordinary people.
1)改为Wanting their children to be leaders
2)rich elite universities没这种搭配
3)mode多指因个人爱好或传统习俗而遵循的方法，应改为educational method
4)改为you can learn how to think
5)改为they will teach you how to think like a leader not as an ordinary people.
6)改为inequality in entering school. study in inequality改为inequality in studying.get job inequality改为inequality in getting a job
7)改为It is much harder for a child in rural area to go to school than a child in urban
改为already inequitable
9)改为all students want to get higher score
10)改为except normal classes
11)改为The problem of inequality in education
文章语句通顺，条理清楚。有适当的举例，但需要注意一些语法问题。

Elitism and Education InequalityWith more and more parents wanting their children to be leaders, elite education is becoming one of the hottest topic in today's life. Elite education originates from the United States, it is those rich method. Their goals are to cultivate the ruler, science and technology elite and commercial giant. Elite education is particular emphasis on pedagogue's intelligence and foundation, elite education does not mean simply to get a higher score, but to check their comprehensive quality to measure them.Of course, elite education has the advantages. First, at least in some ways you can learn how to think. In those elite institutions, they will train you how to think, but this thinking is not like the way how the ordinary people thinking, but to teach you how to think like a leader. Second, you can build some interpersonal relationships for your future's careers. People who have classes with you are also elites, and they can also be the leaders in other companies. Third, it can also support you an envied rich life or other repay. From some universities open golf as a student elective course, to that parents send their children to various etiquette training class competitively, these actions are all reflect out their willing for the elite life.However, elite education will inevitably result in education inequality. Firstly, enter a school inequality. Children in the rural area go to school are much harder than children in urban, especially go to the best school. Many schools when they enroll new students, they prefer to choose the city students. As a result, it has already inequality before they begin to study. Secondly, study in inequality. Nowadays, when we in school, all of us want a higher score,so beside normal classes, we all choose to have other extra classes,such as go to teachers' home ,but we should pay for these extra classes, and normally, the better the teachers are, the higher we should pay for. So if a student whose family is poor, he can't afford cost, so that he cannot have extra classes, and if he is poor, he will can't go to the elite school. In a way, he would fall behind to the others. Thirdly, get job inequality. When these so called elite students graduate, they go to society, with this aura, boss would think their abilities are better than others. As a result, they have more opportunities ,maybe they will get other people's chance although they are not good enough.Education inequality problem cannot be ignored, so we are all hoping that one day education will have no difference between urban and rural areas; that one day education will have no difference between the poor and the rich families; and one day education will have no difference between elite and ordinary people.