Me in the Eyes of other people

When I first saw the name of this composition, I immediately came up with a practice after class of last semester's intensive -reading textbook. Its content is briefly as following:
It is about a film, in which four person were asked about the character and lifestyle of a woman who had been murdered. All of them had known her well, but to each of them she presented a different face. The man who loved her saw her as amusing, intelligent and extravagant. The girl who had been at school with her said that she was reserved hard to make friends with and inclined to be mean. Her boss, for whom she worked as a secretary, found her hard-working but dull, the last person to inspire passion, let alone murder. Her landlady said she was to easy to get on with, untidy and careless about money. "I always had to remind her about rent," she said,"but I liked her. She was always cheerful and willing to lend a hand if anyone was in trouble."
I quite agree with the author's opinion that the film was not so much in who committed the murder, but in how it showed the way in which we all show different sides of ourselves to different people. And I also believe that the people around us show different attitudes toward us too. To tell the truth, I really don't know exactly what impression I have given them. In a normal person's mind, he always beautifies himself so that he feels how other people think of him is just how he thinks of himself. I must not deceive myself too much to think that I am a perfect girl. Therefore, to avoid the happening this kind of thing, I published a say on my QQ asking "how you are thinking about me". The result is of a great surprise but it does make sense. There are not so many contacts giving me a reply. Only those who keep a good relationship with me, who show an interest in me or who just saw my message accidentally. As for others, I don't know whether they hate me then do not intend to answer me at all (After all, many people in the society just are harmonious with each other on the face, not in the heart. There appears no good when coming to an open break in friendship with) or they think there is no need to answer me or they use the Instant Messaging too unoften to have the chance to see my article.
Whereas, those who replied have different ideas too.
My boyfriend sees me as a gorgeous girl, while I know I am just a little pretty. Maybe just as a proverb goes that, beauty is in the eye of the beholder.
Well, my friends say me intensely gentle and brave, but easy to get be taken in. They say I have a strong sense of responsibility, graveness and chariness. Actually, I know most of them just tell the good sides of me in that they are just close nodding acquaintances, so they won't tell what they really think of me. And they will get angry with me if I get mad at them when I've met something crazy and become very furious, just because most of them are not so close. However, when I see a reply saying that I was laughing at his illiteracy. How ridiculous it is! I just asked a question, how could it become laughing words? But after a few minutes' contemplation, I calm down. I know the complaining boy very well. He goes to work before finishing his middle-school study. So he probably has forgotten the meaning of the English word then he misunderstands me. He is a typical of those who have such thought so that they misunderstand me. I don't have that discriminating idea at all. Nonetheless this alike thing is such a common phenomenon in our world. That is to say, people show so many different opinions to the same thing, let alone the attitudes towards a person.
Of course, there are some guys disliking and even hating me. They are so "lazy" to give me a reply. The only thing that they still keep me a contact is that maybe someday I will be useful for them. Thus there is no need to break all the relations with me. It is so easy to understand.
Because of the mentioned things, it is so difficult to write others' impression of me.
Let me conclude it this way: some like me, some hate me; some is indifferent to me and some don't even know me. I am sure you all understand whom the some are referred to! And I am not a special. We all show different sides of ourselves to different people. So in the eyes of other people, I am a all-kinds person. But there is one point I am very sure about is that the people who like me are much more than the ones who hate me!

词汇基本功不错，在学术词汇方面希望能更熟练的使用；句式变化较为明显，另外句法层面做的不错；文章层次不够分明，今后请注意下文章整体的组织结构。开篇的主题比较明确，但中间部分论述的不够集中，有些发散，结尾部分应当与开头的主题相呼应，一些具体的可以修改的地方如下，the name of the composition 一般不用name而是title，第一句话其实可以用remind of来表达，Its content is briefly as following.其实这句话有点多余了，he always beautifies himself so that he feels how other people think of him is just how he thinks of himself，so that后面的和前面的到底有没有联系呢？这句话的意思好像没有表达太清楚。As for others, I don't know whether they hate me then do not intend to answer me at all (After all, many people in the society just are harmonious with each other on the face, not in the heart. 人家只是没回复你一个状态，就得出这样的结论是不是太主观了呢？There appears no good when coming to an open break in friendship with) or they think there is no need to answer me or they use the Instant Messaging too unoften to have the chance to see my article.这句话的句法有些问题，请想想你要表达什么，把层次再分清楚一些。