四十行情诗1048219黄堃

If still you love me
I shall cling and never flee
You are always in my deep
No matter whether you can see

Once we were so happy
So pretty your eyes could be
I leaning to an oak tree
You telling your campus dream

You like the song of Melody
Especially the time when I sing
The moon was bright over the lea
Lighting on your red apple cheek

We are mates as two peas
We are friends knee to knee
I shall become a cup of tea
When you need just drink me

Still remember the day we leave
With the pity not watching the sea
You shall be happy without me
No sorrow and grief as I guarantee

Things are not so easy
As we learn ABC
You locked your mind and your dream
And so happen I have no key

I came to the urban of empty
You went to the city without me
The moon is still over the lea
Would you yet forget me?

You have life needless of me
I am nothing more than a flea
I’m still willing to be your tea
Since I can hold your tear

Where’s our oak tree
Where’s our campus dream
I sing the song of Melody
No one hear but the street

I wish one day sighting the sea
Touch again your red apple cheek
I miss you tonight can you feel
If still you love me

你夸张诶，写得这么棒！
情节很吸引人，读上去也很押韵，就是到后面好像没有这种韵律了，
总体看真的不错哦!
对方会不会被这首情诗给感动了呢？