1048305刘梁娟 Me in the eyes of other people

In our daily life, we all are actors,we play a lot of roles. For me, I am the daughter of my parents, the student of my teachers, the friend of my mates, and I will be an employee of my employer in the future. I act in different ways when I stay with different people,they have varied impressions on me.
First, in my parents' eyes, I am the most lovely girl in the world, I am always friendly to others, and I like studying. But I still have many shortcomings, I am very particular with the food and always don't eat breakfast. Sometimes ,if I want to do something that they don't like me to do, I will insist on doing that and ignore their opinions. Second, in my teachers' eyes, I just a obedient student, I will do what I should do in time, but seldom do something to promote myself. But sometimes I will make some mistakes. For instance, in my high school, there are many rules to obey, if someone do something against the rules, he or she will be punished. I ever offended the rules, and I got punished -- keep standing on the six-floor for one day. I still remembered what my teacher said, she said that she thought me is a very nice girl and never thought me didn't listen her words and disobey the rules, and she changed her preceding impression on me. Third, in my good friends' eyes, I am a self-centred girl, a little selfish and stubborn. I always consider what others do for me is necessary and seldom do something in return. I am not an emotional person, in other words ,I am an indifferent person, so I always do something in my own way. I am also a changeable person, maybe this second I think something is right, but the next second I will change my opinion. Sometimes, if I suggest doing one thing that the other people don't like to do in that time, I will feel unhappy and the next time I will say "No" to the same suggestion. They often tease me , saying that I am so lucky to meet them, and they are so kind to tolerate me. In my spare time, if I stay alone, I will be quiet and just do what I like, such as reading novels and watching TV programs. But if I stay with them, I will be crazy, maybe laughing aloud and playing with them joyfully. Last, after two years later, I will receive many new impressions from my employer and colleagues.
I have different looks in different people's eyes, I am a person with varied characters, but it's all me, I am unique in the world.

文章行文连贯，文中的连接词和过渡词合理，使得全文结构紧凑；能熟练使用长难句，文中的长短句搭配合理，此外文中句式变化多样，希望继续努力，文章用词不错，但是学术词汇不够丰富，建议平时多积累。但有些句子间的关系不是很清楚，比如First, in my parents' eyes, I am the most lovely girl in the world, I am always friendly to others, and I like studying. 这几个是并列还是因果呢？后面的转折其实也显得比较唐突。I still remembered what my teacher said ... 和I am also a changeable person, maybe this second I think something is right, but the next second I will change my opinion.显得太中式化了，最后还有些语法错误，如I am an indifferent person （indifferent不太合适吧？），a obedient student (冠词）， in that time (介词）。文章内容还不错，就是表达上仍有提高的空间，希望继续加油！